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5 comments:

  1. handful of cherry tomatoes - Nora Pellegrino

    at night my tongue loosens
    unwinding from its rusted spool
    i taste iron pooling at the top of my throat
    i have a tin man jaw
    slick with oil and chomping
    under the glowing of the sky’s
    slight orange belly
    the nearing of dark.

    i spit up my mother’s undercooked sharpness
    her mother’s birdlike tendencies
    pouring out both our mouths
    nails and sharp objects
    i correct you
    my jokes aren’t joking
    the whip in my mouth cracks
    and you quiet

    it’s not words so much as
    razor edged shards
    dark metal spilling from my mouth
    i would rather have diamonds or thorny roses
    than this industrial mess
    my cheeks torn and leaking
    i would give all my sips of water and
    every crumb of bread
    to stop this calling up of so many women
    through my lips after
    10 o'clock at night

    i spit out a record needle
    the edge of a chipped tooth that
    crystallizes in my palm
    a piece of string tied to a small anchor from
    a saltwater fish tank
    there’s a lot of scraping
    i grow tired of this evicting
    too bloody to be a vessel
    of history tonight

    i beg to go to bed.
    you cough up a small gem
    in solidarity
    and acquiesce.

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  2. Question and Answer
    by Ruth Dandrea

    This is a test.
    This is only a test.
    If this had been a true
    educational
    experience
    you would have been instructed
    to open a real book
    rather than an examination manual;
    you might have been allowed to talk,
    discuss, argue or simply
    delight in the beauty
    of words on paper;
    you could’ve had time,
    taken time, time
    and time
    again, to reread, look
    out the window
    figure
    how the robin on the maple
    branch figures
    into the bigger
    scheme of things,
    seen circles larger
    that didn't require
    filling in
    with a number
    two pencil,
    fully; you’d have been
    allowed to leave
    stray marks
    and fail to erase
    completely,
    pentimento, every
    artist
    knows adds a depth
    worth
    waiting for. But
    this is only
    a test, which
    makes you subject
    (or is it object)
    not reader
    and certainly not
    writer.

    And when the test
    is in the room,
    I am no longer
    teacher, just proctor,
    or, later, test
    grader,
    when a woman who knows
    none of us
    will drop her six-
    inch binder
    of training
    materials (this
    is not hyperbole,
    I measured
    with my eyes)
    to prepare me
    to read.

    But the best
    will be
    the student
    (excuse me,
    test taker)
    who
    ran out of time
    (we all run out of time)
    who
    didn’t know how to spell
    the character’s
    name
    Morgan,
    and so who
    responded to
    “Why did Morgan…?”
    with
    “Because,
    Moron…”

    This is the best
    the test
    can offer.
    This is what
    this test
    deserves.
    This is the kid
    I will vote for
    for president, or
    at the very least
    commissioner
    of education.

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  3. Funny
    by Cecily Schuler

    In order to write something funny, first
    be upset. Find something on fire that’s crawling
    up the inside of your torso like one too many
    bong hits put you to sleep with the candles left burning,
    wake up to the cat crying, panic tinged, unsure. Wait –

    this isn’t funny.

    In order to write something funny, remember
    the last time you were mad. So mad
    there was only one thing left to do:
    laugh about it. And when laughter crumpled the damning
    and gravity pulled the fury out through the tiny viaducts
    on either side of the bridge spanning your reflection,
    and you swore you could break that mirror with all the weight
    spilling from every empty space inside, you tried, in fact, but wait –

    this isn’t funny.

    In order to write something funny, quit trying
    so hard. Amuse yourself by acknowledging how
    funny you really are, how people are always laughing
    as you perform, as you are always performing, how they
    all love your performance, and as you say to yourself, silly
    people, what do they know about me? Laugh.

    This isn’t funny.

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  4. Oops, I posted my poem under "Week One: Cherry Tomatoes..." I'll repost here, just in case.

    My Dolly Parton

    Sprawled in front of her lit vanity, Auntie proclaims, Prince is
    half-Filipino. She’s trying to help. We sit at her feet, our dirty
    fingernails scratch at black letters spelling out “Our Multicultural Community”
    (“I’m proud to be _____!”), while she lines her lips in Deep Coral,
    rats her hair out to cover her crowning bald spot.
    And so is Janet Jackson.
    A shock of Extra Hold Vidal Sassoon falls over us like lenten baptism
    (“Do you reject Satan? I do.”). But she can’t claim Dolly
    even as we stuff Auntie’s bras with Kleenex, still warm from her night
    shift at AC Transit. Even as we blow dust off from Real Love:
    Dolly and Kenny and belt Just because I’m blonde doesn’t mean
    I’m dumb and shake our tissue tits into a shower. She snatches
    my limp ponytail, blacker than penciled-in eyebrows, then points
    at each fallen sheet and growls,
    save it for the real tears.

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  5. Week 2 Poem

    mary grace

    dove? isola ellis
    io qui america
    tre bambino, si
    marito, non qui
    i gia america
    vado a gli


    from the belly of the big ship we are spit into the maze and i try to find my way
    i cannot speak, do not understand, my little ones tug on my tobacco-stained fingers
    and cry for a home they do not know was already gone before we left
    pietrelcina, san angelo a cupola, green fields and dry winds and no money only
    hungry family and cosimo already gone come he writes on the winds come he
    calls on the waves and someone comes a friend the padrone and puts us on a
    wagon to napoli and puts us on the boat and puts us out to endless seas that are
    not blue, did they tell you this, too, they are green darkening to gray, ebony at
    night never blue long days wander the maze into crazy cradle-rocking nights and
    the babies cry and the little one suckles me dry and my fingers brown from the
    factory rolling rolling rolling tobacco like these waves which are sometimes also
    brown sometimes stealing one for cosimo who when he can’t smoke sucks my
    stained fingers instead says it is almost as good maybe better and it tickles not
    the wet finger but inside my belly where the babies grow cosimo’s mouth hot
    and wet and wanting more than my fingers can give so when he asks me yes
    andiamo? yes i will tell him anything when my fingers and belly where the babies
    grow throb like cocoons waiting to split fisted into blood red geraniums in a pot
    by a window lining the dusty road of the maze i follow and follow but which
    leads nowhere fast and always forgetting something lost behind that i really need
    really need to go back and get but i’m already too late and lost and the babies
    tug on my dry brown fingers which are twigs and break off in their hands and
    now the babies are lost and i am really alone and need to find find everyone
    again and like marquez’s general look for a ladder to climb out of this labyrinth

    i am the cause of the dream nipote the reason for the maze my journey is your
    journey we wander wind the bone of aloneness seeking lost suns of ancient soils

    it all winds down to you granddaughter sitting on the stoop in your father’s my
    son’s black rocking chair rocking and rocking not going out but in swallowing
    memories his mind has let go even those he never knew he knew just felt in the
    bone dirt formed on another continent light and wine i am the dull-colored
    pigeon gurgling in the street lost in the maze, hazy and speaking a language
    nobody knows but what they tell you is true witchwoman that i was are you
    carried over water winding not finding the way until the rocking chair cries like a
    lost child and now i am the black crow of the raucous call that called your green
    eyes, like the sea deepening to dark, your dirt stained fingers brown and crying
    to be sucked your belly where the babies grow empty now and wondering i will
    fill it you find you in the maze all it takes is water and three drops of oil in a bowl
    and though the windings never end and we stay in the maze forever the thing
    they forgot to tell you granddaughter the blood that winds the maze of veins
    bulges in hot weather over the knuckles of your reaching fingers is one i wove
    before you were born because i knew i’d never know you and i knew you’d need
    to know the way there is no way out of the labyrinth labor though you may

    you are the cause of the dream nipote but i am the way red blood rocking hail
    maria full of grazia blessed is the fruit, red and ripe, womb-granddaughter fly

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